MagnusBane

I like it! You had a good hook at the beginning, and starting like that sucked me into the story. There was some good dialogue there, as well - as ...

All right, here goes... Imelda wasn't alone. Good beginning. It really got my attention. Imelda listened, wondering if it had been a part of her dreams. Wondering if what had ...

Granted, but your computer melted and all of your files are gone. I wish I could fly.

Wow, I like it! You can definetely feel the longing and regret the character is experiencing. I did find some little grammar things, though, that you should probably fix: Everlong ...

When life gives you lemons, squirt the juice in people's eyes until they give you the chocolate you asked for instead If at first you don't succeed, well, that's what ...

I just start with two characters. Any two characters. Hobos, circus clowns, a librarian, two college kids, whatever. Then I stick those characters into a random situation, like buying candy ...

Wow, great article! It's very informational, and I know I'll be reading it again! Luckily for me, my beginnings are always the best. Then the whole story kind of goes ...

into a rainbow colored puddle, in which...

Snow white and the seven dwarfs. The unauthorized true story If you’re reading this, “Happy” has probably taken me away for knowing too much.. Okay, this made me laugh! I ...

Hmm, I like it! I would definetely want to read on. You have some good dialogue, but it feels like there's too much emphasis on that. It's almost like you ...

Hey everyone! I just joined this site, and I can't wait to start meeting everyone! I love to write, and I've been writing my own short stories since 1st grade. ...