MagnusBane

Hey, genuine! Welcome to YWS! The site might seem a bit confusing at first, but don't worry - you'll soon be just addicted as the rest of us! If you ...

Hello, Slash! Welcome to Young Writer's Society, soon to be your second home! The site might appear confusing at first, but don't worry - soon you'll be just as addicted ...

Mwahaha! Can you say "dictatorship?" What would you do if your house was haunted by a demented clown ghost?

Wow! I really liked this! Your Muse must have given you some good ideas (unlike mine, who ran off to Italy or something). I did find some little nitpicks though.. ...

Hi! I liked your story a lot! There's just some things I noticed that you might want to fix: Nitpicks (Annoying as they are, I can't help myself) I moved ...

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Triple post? Seriously? Just my luck...

It's not romance, but I'd love if you reviewed this anyways! Please?

Here's the prologue to one of my stories. I would love if you reviewed it!

I would be so much less pathetic than the real main character. No more hysterics or emotional breakdowns if I was in charge. What would you do if you were ...

This is a great beginning! Your first paragraph really caught my attention. I'm guessing that she's a witch of some sort, correct? Other than a couple of minor nitpicks - ...

Wow, this is great! I don't really see any grammar mistakes, and you seem to have all the nitpicky stuff under control. The only thing that I can really point ...

I would love if you reviewed this story for me: Thanks!

All right, I have successfully beat my inner editor into submission (let's just say it took two sporks and one hysterical muse), so here's the very beginning of my story. ...

That was great! I would definetely read on, just to see what Herald's story is. There's not really a lot here for me to review. The other posters seem to ...