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Re: What would YOU do?
I'd grab the dog, the cat and as many of my writing notebooks as I could and run. What would you do if you had a fairy godmother who would ...
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Re: Rate the first sentence above you
3 The second line is good, but I hate the first one. I've read way too many coming-of-age, best-summer-ever, summer-that-changed-my-life-forever stories to have any interest in reading further. So you
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
"Oh, you silly girl. I don't write, I'm a muse. That's your job." ~ Viva " Sniff ... A report on ... sniff ... the life cycle of a maggot. ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: What would YOU do?
I think my brain would probably melt. What would you do if you saw a ghost when you were home all alone? And I'm not talking Casper, I'm talking a ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: Do these even exist?
The Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare. City of Bones is the first book. These are honestly the best books I've ever read. They're funny, action packed, and have just ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: The Inkheart Series
I own them all! I absolutely love these books. I personally thought that Inkheart was the best because it had stronger characterization, but the other books were great too. My ...
May 15, 2009 -
Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]
*gives gold star* Wow. I really couldn't find anything wrong with this story. There was a few little grammar things that can be easily fixed - I think alwaysawriter pointed ...
May 11, 2009 -
Re: The Truth to Mira
You have a Korean Jindo? Lucky! I love those dogs, especially their fluffy tails! They're an absolutely gorgeous breed. Cassandra Clare is my favorite author. Have you read City of ...
May 9, 2009 -
Re: Sachi needs your favorite quotes!
You're probably going for some deep, profound quotes that will bring meaning to your life, but I'm going to give you these instead. :) "Shadowhunters: Looking better in black than ...
May 7, 2009 -
Re: Hit the Black
I agree with Meep. It freaked me out, too. Overall, I thought everything past the "Two Weeks Later" part was really good. The first part could use some work, though, ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Do your characters know that they're not real real?
Nope. Realistic as my characters are, they know that they aren't real. (Well, except for Jimmy D, but he's just crazy.) I wasn't aware that people write letters to their ...
Apr 28, 2009 -
Re: Rapid Reviews
I wrote this story with a friend, and we'd really appreciate a review! Please?
Apr 24, 2009 -
Re: Introducing ...........
Hey, Nicole! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll find the site very addicting! Our biggest rule here is our 2:1 ratio. Basically, for every story or poem you want to ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: The Life of a Fantasy Freak
Hey! I love fantasy too. I'm not a big fan of Lord of the Rings, either, though. There's way too much landscape description, and I just can't imagine the characters ...
Apr 22, 2009 -
Re: Redcap #1
Scall stalked the demon like a shadow. I like your hook, although the simile seems a bit cliche. He sat in a small coffee shop on the sixth floor of ...
Apr 18, 2009
