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  • Writing Activities Re: What would YOU do?

    I'd grab the dog, the cat and as many of my writing notebooks as I could and run. What would you do if you had a fairy godmother who would ...

    May 16, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Rate the first sentence above you

    3 The second line is good, but I hate the first one. I've read way too many coming-of-age, best-summer-ever, summer-that-changed-my-life-forever stories to have any interest in reading further. So you

    May 15, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: Character Answer Game [2]

    "Oh, you silly girl. I don't write, I'm a muse. That's your job." ~ Viva " Sniff ... A report on ... sniff ... the life cycle of a maggot. ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Writing Activities Re: What would YOU do?

    I think my brain would probably melt. What would you do if you saw a ghost when you were home all alone? And I'm not talking Casper, I'm talking a ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: Do these even exist?

    The Mortal Instruments series by Cassandra Clare. City of Bones is the first book. These are honestly the best books I've ever read. They're funny, action packed, and have just ...

    May 15, 2009
  • Media Reviews Re: The Inkheart Series

    I own them all! I absolutely love these books. I personally thought that Inkheart was the best because it had stronger characterization, but the other books were great too. My ...

    May 15, 2009
  • General Articles Re: This Is What I Wish I Could Say To You [1]

    *gives gold star* Wow. I really couldn't find anything wrong with this story. There was a few little grammar things that can be easily fixed - I think alwaysawriter pointed ...

    May 11, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Truth to Mira

    You have a Korean Jindo? Lucky! I love those dogs, especially their fluffy tails! They're an absolutely gorgeous breed. Cassandra Clare is my favorite author. Have you read City of ...

    May 9, 2009
  • Lounge, The Re: Sachi needs your favorite quotes!

    You're probably going for some deep, profound quotes that will bring meaning to your life, but I'm going to give you these instead. :) "Shadowhunters: Looking better in black than ...

    May 7, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hit the Black

    I agree with Meep. It freaked me out, too. Overall, I thought everything past the "Two Weeks Later" part was really good. The first part could use some work, though, ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • Research Re: Do your characters know that they're not real real?

    Nope. Realistic as my characters are, they know that they aren't real. (Well, except for Jimmy D, but he's just crazy.) I wasn't aware that people write letters to their ...

    Apr 28, 2009
  • WRFF Archive Re: Rapid Reviews

    I wrote this story with a friend, and we'd really appreciate a review! Please?

    Apr 24, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: Introducing ...........

    Hey, Nicole! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you'll find the site very addicting! Our biggest rule here is our 2:1 ratio. Basically, for every story or poem you want to ...

    Apr 22, 2009
  • Welcome Mat Re: The Life of a Fantasy Freak

    Hey! I love fantasy too. I'm not a big fan of Lord of the Rings, either, though. There's way too much landscape description, and I just can't imagine the characters ...

    Apr 22, 2009
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Redcap #1

    Scall stalked the demon like a shadow. I like your hook, although the simile seems a bit cliche. He sat in a small coffee shop on the sixth floor of ...

    Apr 18, 2009


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