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That was great! It was definitely very realistic and Addie's character reminds me of... well, me, sometimes. :)

Yes! Voices in people's heads! *high fives* I love crazy people! You just made my day with Twister. :) Ahem. Anyways, the review. Well, your characterization is pretty strong, but ...

Here's my second, very minor character: Name: Harry Age:34 Gender: Male Appearance: A heavyset man with piggy little eyes. His dirty blond hair is starting to thin, something that he ...

Exactly. I agree with everything you've said. I've also noticed that most fan fiction is just bad writing, period. I think that it's because a lot of people are lazy ...

That was just rude. I can't believe he'd do that in front of all of those people and ruin her moment like that. This isn't the first award show West ...

She breathes her approval. I kind of know what your meant to say here, but I would choose a different word than "breathe." It just sounds weird and it doesn't ...

Hey OynxFire! Welcome to the most magical place in the world, YWS! That's really cool that your English teacher supports you. The most mine ever does is argue with me ...

Wow. You captured the character of Austin perfectly and the emotion in the story was great. I felt bad for him, and bad for his family, too. His poor mom ...

Well, I really liked this. It was a bit confusing mostly because you don't tell the reader why Eli's there, or what the place is. I'm sure you'll explain that ...

I'm reading "Dead Witch Walking" by Kim Harrison

You get a purple banana -inserts coin-

Wow, Rosey! 41? That's awesome! Congrats Greeters! :)

Do you believe in ghosts? And has anyone had any experiences with the paranormal?

I wouldn't use the names "Thorn" and "Murtagh" together in the same book, seeing as they were both used in Paolini's series and it will definitely look like you're stealing ...

Hi Aqua! I think I've seen you around a couple of the forums before, but I don't think we've ever talked. You have a Lurcher? I love those dogs! Okay, ...