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Jas "Well, this is fun," I said. Lorraine, laying in a second bed, rolled her eyes, and Grayson sighed. "We're recovering from terrible injuries. We're not supposed to be having ...

I always do this. I have notebooks full of stories that I wrote when I was in elementary school, all dated, and it's really convenient. I can compare stories from ...

Jas "I can't believe this!" I exclaimed. "The people who attacked the Rogue are running free in the city, and I'm stuck in bed." Grayson, sitting in a chair on ...

Jas "I don't know where the powder came from. She was like that before I found her," Grayson said. "I can't believe Krissy attacked you!" Lorraine spat, sounding disgusted. I ...

(Wasn't Gryk part of the Rogue's court?) Jas The man moved closer, and I saw that he was short, with blond hair and a fish tattooed on his forearm in ...

Your characters are very realistic, I'll give you that. Zi's such a jerk. Why does he have to keep his and Leila's relationship a secret? Is he ashamed that his ...

I'm just not feeling the emotion in this chapter. The main character keeps going on and on about how afraid she is the man is going to whip out a ...

Jas I slumped against the stall door, letting the knife slip from my shaking fingers. Shadow was watching me from across the aisle, her brown eyes looking accusing. "Don't look ...

The one change that I think would have made the biggest impact on Twilight is if, in New Moon, it had been Edward who had lunged for Bella, not Jasper. ...

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Right now I'm leaning towards working with horses and writing on the side. Neither job is probably ever going to make me rich, but at least I'll be doing what ...

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The characters are always first. Sometimes they sit in some dark corner of my mind for years, just waiting for a story. Eventually I'll get an idea that fits a ...