MagnusBane

Excellent job! This is the best part yet, I think. :) My only question is, where is Bella during this? Wouldn't she be pretty upset if Edward was that depressed?

I'm only at 4,500 right now. I'm going to have to do some serious writing this weekened to catch up. June... What? Is that even possible? It's day five!

Jas The low murmur of voices woke me. I sat up quickly, gasping when my head start spinning. "She's awake," Kayla said glumly. I was sitting in the same bed ...

Jas Kayla rushed into the dark tavern. Almost immediately there was a shout and the sound of a struggle. "Damn it!" I swore. I shoved the man away from me ...

Tomato

It's day 2, I'm 4,000 words in, and I still have no idea what my story's about. :(

Jas The man seemed oblivious to the tip of my knife pressing between his shoulder blades as we crossed through the dark city streets, humming under his breath like he ...

2,110 words. That's all. Technically, I'm ahead of schedule, but I'm still kind of disappointed that that's all I got today. Oh well... Day 1 and I already want to ...

Jas I hesitated, looking from Kayla's stubborn face to the flicker of hope in Lorraine's eyes. I wanted to believe that this man had the answers we so desperately needed, ...

Jas Gryk's house was just a dark, hulking shape in the moonlight, like a monster glowering at us. We halted outside the front gate, exchanging suddenly nervous looks. The house, ...

Jas I hurried after Kayla and grabbed her by the arm, pulling her to a stop. "Wait!" She jerked away from me. "Don't touch me, Jas, or I swear I'll ...

Jas I stared after the Rogue, shocked, as water and blood trickled down the wall and pooled at my feet. "Did he seriously just walk away?" I muttered to Kayla. ...

That's true. Then how are we going to do this? Someone is going to have to die. There's no way Kayla and Lorraine - Jas too, I guess, though she ...

True love... *gag* What if the Rogue does something so sick, so unforgivable, that Kayla, Lorraine and Jas lose all of their loyalty for him? Kayla and Jas have already ...

Jas I sank to the floor just outside the Rogue's room, angrily wiping tears from my eyes. "He didn't even listen," I said bitterly. "He doesn't care." Lorraine sighed. "I ...