MagnusBane

Jas "Of course," Krissy said. We stared at each other for a long moment. A horrible hush had descended on the room. Out of the corner of my eye, I ...

Mike IS kind of pathetic, but he's not really that bad. I don't get it either.

Jas I stalked back to the food table, furious, and poured myself a glass of wine. I had only taken one sip of it when Lorraine marched over and snatched ...

Jas I watched Grayson mutter something to the Rogue and walk away from the throne, shoulders slouched. I caught up to him halfway across the room. "You've got some nerve, ...

I think it would be kind of arrogant for us to assume that humans are the only things in the galaxy that are 'intelligent.' There's got to be something else ...

^ Congrats, Hippie! :) I just hit 15,000 words today, which means that I'm officially on schedule! It's getting much easier to write. The first few days I wanted to ...

Sure, Jas can fight Krissy. Hit in the head? Again? Man, poor Jas just gets one concussion after another in this story. :)

Jas Surprisingly, I was actually enjoying this party. Sure, I knew we should be hunting Krissy Hunter and her friends, but it was nice to be laughing with Kayla and ...

First person can be good in certain situations, but you really have to be careful that your main character doesn't become too much like you. I've found that it's easier ...

City

9,035 Hopefully I'll be able to get a couple thousand more words in before bed, but I doubt it's going to happen. My characters just aren't cooperating right now!

Jas "Shouldn't have pried?" Kayla asked, suddenly furious. "We thought we were saving his life! We even told him what we had found, and he still lied to us!" "He's ...

Jas I sat in the bed, my head in my hands. I knew I should be hunting down Krissy right now, getting revenge, doing my job, but I just couldn't ...

Italy

I find that the name of the character isn't very important. At the beginning of the book it might seem not quite right, but once you start writing you'll find ...