MagnusBane

I really liked this! It was funny, and the voice of the main character was very distinct and very... fangirlish. :D I did notice a few things, though. “Shut up, ...

Storm

Ooh, that's a good idea Mizzle! :) Today we got a 10 minute in Chemistry about not pouring the chemicals we were going to be working with down the sink. ...

Cassie Well, so much for sleeping, I thought miserably, watching everyone mill around and talk in low voices. It was just after 3 in the morning, and now we were ...

I have to write somewhere alone, with music playing. Usually I write at my best when it's one or two in the morning, for some reason.

My day was decent. We learned about Freud's disturbing theories in Human Behavior, and wrote four essays in History. (Fun. Not!) Then in Chemistry my lab partner knocked over a ...

Cassie There was an awkward silence when Julian left. After a long moment, I scrambled to my feet. "I'd better go," I said, not meeting Antonio's eyes. "It's getting late." ...

Gross

Wow, that's really exciting! Congrats! I play piano too! How long have you been playing?

Hamburger

Cassie "Not at all," I said, smiling a little. I hesitantly sat back down again next to him, the puppy between us. It was the cutest little dog I'd seen ...

Cold

Tiger

Dog

This part isn't bad writing, it just doesn't seem very... realistic to me. Not that ink men are realistic, but the previous parts were so well done it seemed believable. ...