MagnusBane

Cassie Everyone crowded around Cara. Cassie wasn't sure what she had been expecting to find inside the necklace - A picture, maybe? Or a note? - but she was disappointed. ...

It seems surreal . I decide it isn’t real . You already said that it seems surreal. You don't need the second sentence. The word is pounding with every step ...

Cassie They walked back in silence. Cassie could tell that Cara was upset about her ruined things, but she didn't know what to say to comfort her. It was dark ...

Hurts

Beginnings are really, really hard for me. And finding things to write about is hard too. I think my muse went on a permanent vacation

*** I have no idea where I'm going with this either xD *** Cassie "It's a necklace," Amp said, rolling his eyes. "Big deal." Cara picked it up and let ...

A spitting match? It sounds like the kid was just as crazy as the mom.

Fry

Well, I have bluish-gray eyes, so I guess I'm a little biased. :) I personally don't pay that much attention to eye colors, but I guess any eye is pretty ...

Cassie "Yeah," Cassie said, glancing up at the sky nervously. It was streaked with pink and gold, and the sun was starting to sink below the horizon. "We'd better hurry ...

Splat sound? Wouldn't it be more like a... a... crunching sound? Oh no, now I'm grossing myself out. :shock:

Clap

Cassie "Do you have any idea where it could be?" Cassie asked as they headed out of the shelter. She was relieved to be outside again - the shelter was ...

I really liked this. Your main character seems very realistic. “ Crys, you bitch!” she screeched. At first I thought that was a typo, and you meant "Cry." I didn't ...

Cassie Cara had to have the most annoying shriek Cassie had ever heard. She thought she was starting to get a migraine from it. "We can help you look for ...