Magnificent_Ego

I was disappointed. The song is not a new release--it is merely an old song redone to be released on the new album. However, this does not change the fact ...

Hello again, Pinata. As always, a largely stylistic critique--if something I have written does not ring true, as the writer you have every right to disregard it. The beginning of ...

Hello, Pinata. As always, most of my critique is purely stylistic, so if anything does not ring true to you, feel free to disregard. Your first paragraph is a fine ...

Hello, Kyte. If I'm not mistaken, all of my suggestions are purely stylistic, purely personal opinion. Feel free to disregard if they do not ring true to you. Initial impressions: ...

Extremely impressive. Color, contrast, lighting effects...all very professional. The color choice and the vividness of the Mountain Dew ad are very, very appealing. Nicely done. -ME

That was a rather crass remark, Mike. I believe that he means, Thanatos, is that in order to enable your reviewers to more easily read your work, you should double ...

If you are looking to add another hand, a larger one, I suggest bringing it in from the lower right area of the piece, for their seems to be more ...

The color and shading in this look very professional; something you would see in an anime. However, the actual line-art could use some work. The pose is bland, the arms ...

Hello, Absynthe. Forgive me if my reviewing method is rather....methodical, but I prefer details to the larger picture. I will, of course, give you my overall opinion at the end ...

Admission Process Entry into SPEW is done through an intense nomination process. SPEW looks at a sample critique and story by the nominee, as well as how they participate on ...

Disclaimer--this critique is purely stylistic. If you agree with the comments, use them. If not, do NOT take my opinion as law. On to the critique. ^_^ God has made ...

I am not big on arranged matches. In the case of Crysi, however, I will make an exception. ^_^

Merely as a stylistic point--Your dialogue, to me at least, detracts from the story. Both the manner in which it is written, and the words themselves, are rather broken. As ...

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OOC: Great concept. I think the groups will clash, creating tension with the writers, but it could be fun. I will give it a chance, for my first storybook. Name: ...