Mageheart

And me. His fear is actually based on my own, only about a hundred times worse. I'm way younger than him, and I have the courage to take a broom ...

I'll edit those parts you mentioned. Thanks for the advice there. :D You're right on it being more Schadel's point of view first, and then Chi's. But I'm glad that ...

Oh, and you're welcome!

I didn't realize that. *sweatdrops* I tried checking that online, but nothing showed up. Well, you learn something new everyday! I'm not a vegetarian, but I never have and never ...

You're welcome!

I don't feel like I could leave a review for something like this. You're opening up to the internet, something I can only do through subtle hints in my writing. ...

I love when I figure out when I should drop them! :D

Well, this story, along with the next case, are both on the smaller side because this one is doing the introducing of the world, and the next one is a ...

Thanks again for reviewing! I'll make sure to be more detailed there in the revised version. I understand that my writing can be improved in the detail department. Thanks for ...

Once again, thanks for reviewing! As I've said before, I really appreciate it! I didn't think of separating that before, but now I'll make sure to do that in the ...

This really made me smile. I was feeling overworked, and then I hopped onto YWS and saw this in the literary spotlight. I was expecting to see writing advice, and ...

I understand what you're saying, and I'm definitely not trying to insult you and your opinion. I mean, after all, we can all have our own thoughts on things. But ...

You, my fellow writer, are a genius.

I'm glad you are! And thanks for reviewing, by the way! I really appreciate it! You're right. All will be explained in Chapter 3. :D I think my version of ...

I'll try to work on that little part. I should be able to come up with something to make it better. :D I'll also fix what you pointed out, and ...