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Mageheart

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  • Poetry » Politics, Health Re: the last four years

    Ahhh thank you so much for your praise and review, Shady!!

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Politics, Health Re: the last four years

    Thank you so much for your review, Kon!! heart I feel like this is proving your gaslighting point, but I didn't even see it as gaslighting originally. I kept the ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: pink band-aids and your old prom dress

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad I'm not the only one who loves you poems. c: There's something really fun about writing them and knowing that it's ...

    Jan 21, 2021
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: Ashes, Ashes (We All Fall Down)

    I was going to leave a review on this, but I realized that I didn't have any specific to critique. I just wanted to gush about how much I love ...

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Politics, Health Re: the last four years

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. c:

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: pink band-aids and your old prom dress

    Ahhh thank you so much Kon!!

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Culture, Realistic Re: pink band-aids and your old prom dress

    Ahhh thank you! It was about accepting femininity - at least, femininity in my clothes/accessories. I'm not super femme, but it was a cool moment today when I realized how ...

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: skydiving as a metaphor for love

    Ahh thank you so much for your review! It was really helpful. Wordy poems are something I've been trying to work on, so it's great knowing where I can trim ...

    Jan 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: ​a poem about hope and giving it to others

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad that this poem made you feel the way that you did. Now that I'm looking back on the poem, I can see what ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: ​a poem about hope and giving it to others

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Fanfiction Re: ​a poem about hope and giving it to others

    Thank you so much! I'm glad that you enjoyed my poem. I usually don't feel this way towards Minecraft, either, but there was just something about seeing those torches and ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: skydiving as a metaphor for love

    Thank you for your review! I'm sorry that you didn't enjoy this poem as much as you enjoyed my last one. I want to focus on the juxtaposition of falling ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: skydiving as a metaphor for love

    Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked my metaphor. I'm not sure what originally led me to come up with it, but it really did feel like the ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: skydiving as a metaphor for love

    Thank you for your review! I think the best way to describe the helicopter is what's "normal" for me right now. It also serves as a base for jumping/falling in ...

    Jan 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: skydiving as a metaphor for love

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm grateful that my poem conveyed the internal confusion I've been feeling lately. I also really love the idea about expanding on what ...

    Jan 8, 2021


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