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Mageheart

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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2

    Thank you so much for your review! I'm sorry for taking so long to reply to it, but I did see it and I'll take everything you said into consideration ...

    Thu Nov 24, 2016 1:33 pm
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Broken

    Thank you so much for the review! ^_^ Actually, it wasn't originally intentionally. But then I used it twice, realized it fit perfectly, and went on to use it throughout ...

    Thu Nov 24, 2016 1:31 pm
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 2

    That's very punny, @Persistence. Thanks. ^_^

    Mon Nov 21, 2016 9:30 pm
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Broken

    Thank you for kind words and helpful advice! ^_^ I'll make sure to keep it in mind when I'm writing more poems in the future! ^_^

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 12:35 pm
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Hidden Eagle

    Thank you for your kind words and helpful review! ^_^ I'll make sure to keep everything you said in mind when I write more poetry in the future. ^_^

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 12:34 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silver Lining

    Thank you so much for review! ^_^ I totally understand what you're saying. I'll leave this poem as it is, but when I write poetry in the future, I'll definitely ...

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:30 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silver Lining

    Thank you for your review! ^_^ Back when I wrote this a couple of months ago, I chose to use repetition to drive my point home. But I'll definitely remember ...

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:29 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: People Manual

    Thank you so much for your review! ^_^ The "he" mentioned is the fictional character who doesn't understand people; when I wrote this a couple of years ago, I had ...

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:27 am
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Broken

    Thank you for your review! ^_^ I wrote this one more recently, so I'm glad that there was some improvements. ^_^ It was a couple of months ago, but that ...

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:25 am
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: Hidden Eagle

    Thank you for your review! ^_^ I wrote this for a school assignment about a book I read for school called Juliet by Anne Fortier. It was a book that ...

    Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:22 am
  • Poetry » General, General Re: People Manual

    God dang it. Past me of a couple of years ago, you should have used your brain. Past me of a couple of hours ago, you should have been thinking ...

    Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:12 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silver Lining

    I understand. Thank you for all of your advice - it definitely helped - and I hope you have a great day too! ^_^

    Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:11 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: People Manual

    Alright! ^_^

    Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:49 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Silver Lining

    Thank you for your kind words, and thank you for liking this poem! ^_^

    Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:48 pm
  • Poetry » General, General Re: People Manual

    You definitely helped! ^_^ Thank you so much for your advice. When I revise this someday in the future and make a better version of it, do you want me ...

    Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:43 pm


When you cut pieces out of the truth to avoid looking like a fool, you end up looking like a moron instead.
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