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Re: The Automaton's Heart: Chapter 2
Thank you so much for your review! I'm sorry for taking so long to reply to it, but I did see it and I'll take everything you said into consideration ...
Thu Nov 24, 2016 1:33 pm -
Re: Broken
Thank you so much for the review! ^_^ Actually, it wasn't originally intentionally. But then I used it twice, realized it fit perfectly, and went on to use it throughout ...
Thu Nov 24, 2016 1:31 pm -
Re: (old) Atana: Chapter 2
That's very punny, @Persistence. Thanks. ^_^
Mon Nov 21, 2016 9:30 pm -
Re: Broken
Thank you for kind words and helpful advice! ^_^ I'll make sure to keep it in mind when I'm writing more poems in the future! ^_^
Sun Nov 13, 2016 12:35 pm -
Re: Hidden Eagle
Thank you for your kind words and helpful review! ^_^ I'll make sure to keep everything you said in mind when I write more poetry in the future. ^_^
Sun Nov 13, 2016 12:34 pm -
Re: Silver Lining
Thank you so much for review! ^_^ I totally understand what you're saying. I'll leave this poem as it is, but when I write poetry in the future, I'll definitely ...
Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:30 am -
Re: Silver Lining
Thank you for your review! ^_^ Back when I wrote this a couple of months ago, I chose to use repetition to drive my point home. But I'll definitely remember ...
Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:29 am -
Re: People Manual
Thank you so much for your review! ^_^ The "he" mentioned is the fictional character who doesn't understand people; when I wrote this a couple of years ago, I had ...
Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:27 am -
Re: Broken
Thank you for your review! ^_^ I wrote this one more recently, so I'm glad that there was some improvements. ^_^ It was a couple of months ago, but that ...
Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:25 am -
Re: Hidden Eagle
Thank you for your review! ^_^ I wrote this for a school assignment about a book I read for school called Juliet by Anne Fortier. It was a book that ...
Sun Nov 13, 2016 3:22 am -
Re: People Manual
God dang it. Past me of a couple of years ago, you should have used your brain. Past me of a couple of hours ago, you should have been thinking ...
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:12 pm -
Re: Silver Lining
I understand. Thank you for all of your advice - it definitely helped - and I hope you have a great day too! ^_^
Sat Nov 12, 2016 5:11 pm -
Re: People Manual
Alright! ^_^
Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:49 pm -
Re: Silver Lining
Thank you for your kind words, and thank you for liking this poem! ^_^
Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:48 pm -
Re: People Manual
You definitely helped! ^_^ Thank you so much for your advice. When I revise this someday in the future and make a better version of it, do you want me ...
Sat Nov 12, 2016 3:43 pm
