Mageheart

I don't mind at all! I'm really grateful for the reviews that you've been leaving. They're really helpful, and, while I'm not sure if this will ever be more than ...

Thank you so much for the review! I'm so glad the backstory doesn't seem forced into the chapter. Lorcan's actually an original character (same thing with Second), so expect to ...

Every time I see someone say that they like Lorcan, I die a little on the inside because he's secretly my favorite. The next chapters will hopefully give you more ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad my description of the setting is enough. I always have trouble figuring out how to go into enough detail, but it looks like I've ...

I think a lot of people (myself included) use the world of Minecraft as the building blocks - like it's just the background to the story, and you don't have ...

MAYBE THERE ARE Chapter seven (I think?) goes into more detail about what Second and Lorcan were referring to, but Minecraft doesn't actually involve owning people. It's pretty much just ...

My chapters are notoriously short, especially when it comes to my fics. :P Some end up being a bit longer, but I've had to jump a lot between character perspectives ...

It's definitely something I need to explain - possibly in a newer version of the fourth chapter - but they're not used to people looking like her actually speaking. They're ...

Hi, BlueAfrica! Thank you so much for reviewing my work. I saw that you also reviewed the next two chapters, so I'll reply to those as soon as this reply ...

Thanks for the review! I'm glad that I've been doing so well with them. If I remember correctly, the next two chapters should go into more about each character. I ...

Thank you for your kind words and the review! The chapters I have written so far do go more into each character, and I plan on exploring their pasts and ...

Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.

Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you like my story so far, and I hope you like the future chapters. c: Charlotte's reaction is pretty much how I would react, though ...

Thank you so much for reviewing this chapter! I'm glad that you're enjoying the story so far, and I hope you continue to enjoy it. c: There's actually a reason ...

Thank you for your review! This poem was inspired by my own struggles with school (though this event in particular hasn't happened yet), so I admit that I didn't think ...