Mageheart

you have but that plan is very valid xD

Thanks for the review! I'm glad I did the contrast with Ikach well. Let's just say that I have lots of plans for him, and I wanted to get across ...

Thanks for the review! The thing that you're remembering from last chapter is how Cass recognized a complete stranger, and Aspen didn't react in the way that she had hoped ...

I know I already said this on Discord, but thank you so so so much for this review! I'm feeling pretty terrible right now because my body has decided it ...

Thanks for the review! I'm really happy that this isn't an insta-love situation, but I still feel that even mentioning that it could be in the realm of possibility is ...

Oh, cool! I'm glad that helps, and I can see the problems with Aspen. The Aldonius attraction is actually meant to be pretty strong for reasons I unfortunately can't say ...

Thanks for your review! About what you said regarding the Kansas comment: I can see what you mean! @BlueAfrica actually came up with a fun way to make that stand ...

Thanks for the review! I also enjoyed that the first people they met weren't trying to kill them, however it felt a tad plot-convenient that they would fall into the ...

Thanks for the review! I'm crossing my fingers that the reason for the extra-long tunnel descriptions was because I was just trying to find out how I wanted to write ...

I was guessing that was the case! I tend to do the same things in my own stories. THat's great! I was hoping it would.

Thanks for the review! I think a lot of the issues you had with this would be resolved if you knew some of what happened in the last few chapters. ...

Thanks for the review! Maybe there could be hatred in his eyes when he looks at the locket, but unless he's quite stupid I don't think he would hate a ...

Omg, I just thought of something! It's totally unrelated to the Kansas comment, but what if when Aspen and Cass finally get a chance to rest somewhere, Aspen makes a ...

I read your review and then died a little on the inside because it's perfect. not gonna lie I maybe ship Cass with Lira a lil bit too just from ...

Thanks for the review! Hopefully, I'll be able to work this part of the story out in future drafts, and I really appreciate the pointers you gave me. Wait, what ...