Mageheart

Thank you for your review! I'll be really curious to see what your reviews on the pacing of the novel are once the story progresses some more! I feel like ...

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you're liking the dynamic I'm setting up! I was hoping people would notice that when reading through the story, and I'm hoping that ...

Thank you for your review! After reading through Aldonius's explanation of what Cass has been going through, do you think that the chapter still isn't needed? I was worried his ...

Thank you for the review! I'm hoping that I'll be able to avoid the flip-flopping of the feelings in the future chapters - I'm guessing it's so much of a ...

I'm going to take that as a no on the spoilers, then. :P

Awwww. What a bummer that Cass doesn't picture herself as the hero even in her own fantasies. I was going to have her imagine herself as a hero when dreaming ...

Okay! Thanks! That fits what I was going for. My thoughts are that Cass is a lot like me when it comes to the ideas of souls - I know ...

Okay! Thanks! That fits what I was going for. My thoughts are that Cass is a lot like me when it comes to the ideas of souls - I know ...

Okay! Thanks! That fits what I was going for. My thoughts are that Cass is a lot like me when it comes to the ideas of souls - I know ...

Okay! Thanks! That fits what I was going for. My thoughts are that Cass is a lot like me when it comes to the ideas of souls - I know ...

Okay! Thanks! That fits what I was going for. My thoughts are that Cass is a lot like me when it comes to the ideas of souls - I know ...

ALSO I forgot to reply to this part but the description of souls was bugging me too when I was trying to write the chapter. I was also rushing that ...

Thank you so much for your review! I'm sorry for not replying to it sooner. I really hope that she begins to realize that it's okay to let others know ...

Thank you for the advice and comment! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far.

Thank you so much for your review! Looking back at this chapter, I definitely can see the creep factor. I think it might have been something I picked up on ...