Mageheart

Good guess! This is actually another Kartiel, but with a backstory heavily inspired by the one you know. :) I've been meaning to reply to your reviews/comments before now, but ...

I know this is an old poem and about a level of schooling I haven't reached yet, but I found it incredibly relatable and well-written. I'll do an actual review ...

Thanks!

Thank you so much for your review! I'm glad that you liked my story, and I can definitely see what you mean about the long sentences - it's something I ...

Thanks for the review! I definitely need some more help with making Damien seem mysterious and creepy, so I really appreciate you pointing out what doesn't work as well - ...

Thanks for the review! I'm really glad you liked the characters. I've always liked writing characters who can see ghosts when the rest of the world can't, and I wanted ...

Thanks for your review! The lines you quoted are a reference to the Winchesters - the main characters - and their devotion to one another. Even though there's always some ...

Thanks for your comment! I'm glad you love the rhythm, and I'm glad I did a good job with the imagery.

Thank you so much for your review! I really like your interpretation. :)

Thanks for the review and suggestions! I'm definitely going to check out those forms of poetry when I get a chance.

Thanks for the review! If you ever want to give me your guesses on what happened in the poem, I'd be happy to tell you if you got them right ...

Thank you so much! I thought it was a weak poem thanks to it being so short, but I guess this is a sign I should try my hand at ...

Aw, thank you! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. Most of my poems are actually longer ones, but I'll let you know if I ever post anything else like this ...

Hi again! Thanks for reviewing my old poetry - I really appreciate it. This poem was actually a little bit of an autobiography; I was feeling really frustrated with how ...

Thank you so much for your review! I admit I had to reread the poem again so I could remember everything that I was intending with it. :P Thanks for ...