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Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 23
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax “How was your summer, Margo Brown?” A familiar voice patronized. The "A" after the quotation mark ...
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Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 23.2
Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I couldn't find any problems with either of these things, so I'll move on to the ...
Dec 17, 2017 -
Re: Charlie's Fire {Part One}
Hello, emolemon! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax “No, I’ve been looking for a roommate anyways. You forgot the quotation mark at the end ...
Dec 17, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 23.1
Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't spot any problems with either of these things, so I'll just move onto the ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 9.1 (As Graceful As Ever)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax The bear advisor gave an intensely murderous look as Leathan, sitting beside Catharnach, whispered in Catharnach’s ...
Dec 12, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 22 (final ch of part 1)
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax Juno shrieked and slammed her fists on the grass, “You fucking psychopath!” She yelled after him. ...
Dec 4, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 8.2
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax Starting from the beginning of the chapter, your sentences were on the longer side. While they're ...
Dec 4, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 22
Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Dec 2, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 21
Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 20
Hello, marms! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 29, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 8.1 (Not Your Morning to Shine)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 7.2
Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 28, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 21.2
Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 21.1
Hello, BlueAfrica! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 27, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 7.1 (Warmongers)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I've been trying to settle on a reviewing format that I love, but I'm still not sure what works ...
Nov 14, 2017