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Re: Chapter 12.1 (You Can't Go Home, But You Can't Stay Here)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't have any problems with the grammar itself, but I thought this would be the ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 27
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax From the moment Mrs. Brown and Margo spoke their greetings to the Pages, Mrs. Page had ...
Jan 21, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 11.2
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't see any problems here, so I'll move onto the other parts of my review. ...
Jan 13, 2018 -
Re: Charlie's Fire {Part Three}
Hello, emolemon! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax This chapter shared the same grammatical problems as the last one. My biggest suggestion is to ...
Jan 12, 2018 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 26
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't have any problems with this, so I'll move onto the other sections! Characters One ...
Jan 8, 2018 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 25.1
Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't see any problems with this, so I'll move onto the other parts of the ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Charlie's Fire {Part Two}
Hello, emolemon! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax “Josh can you toss me some jeans?” There should be a comma after "Josh". I doubt ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 11.1 (When The Moons Come)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax Latton coughed twice, appearing anxious, and then said, “your lady is tired at the moment from ...
Jan 2, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 10.3
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax The sentence variety is pretty strong in this chapter, and I didn't catch any major grammatical ...
Dec 31, 2017 -
Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 24.2
Hello, BlueAfrica! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I didn't have any problems with this section, so I'll just move onto the other parts! ...
Dec 31, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 10.2
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax The sentence variety is pretty strong in this chapter, and I didn't catch any major grammatical ...
Dec 27, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 25
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax “I’m going to the library do you want to come?” Zara had gotten up from her ...
Dec 25, 2017 -
Re: There's So Much More To Juno Blackwood: chapter 24
Hello, marms! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax The beginning few paragraphs have the same style of sentences, so I suggest adding some sentence ...
Dec 25, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 10.1 (For The Man Who Has Nothing)
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I don't have any problems with your grammar and/or syntax, so I'll just move onto the ...
Dec 19, 2017 -
Re: Chapter 9.2
Hello, TheSilverFox! I hope my review can do your work justice. Grammar and Syntax I don't have any problems with your grammar and/or syntax, so I'll just move onto the ...
Dec 19, 2017