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Re: the life of an american teenager
Thanks for the compliments! The half hourglass was entirely unintentional, so thanks for pointing it out - I'm definitely going to make it more defined in rewrites.
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Re: Choices made and in the making
I really love your latest poem! I especially love the different musical words you threw in - it reminds me of my childhood piano lessons.
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Re: The Username Change Log
I used to be Jaybird, but now I'm back to a mage-themed username - Magebird. :)
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Re: The Death of a Friend
"Bo," Kartiel repeated - I had a feeling he'd be smiling if he could. He just had that tone to his voice. "I know the spells to bring people between ...
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Re: The Emerald City
Wren didn't get a chance to give an answer. She had simplified what had happened when explaining it to Amy and Scott, but she had hoped that Amy would read ...
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Re: Bloodruns Keep
There was a pause. The queen - who had been doubting it all along - was instinctively ready to give a fist pump at the moment of victory, but she ...
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Re: The Schooling of the Desolate
"Agreed," Raptor said, giving a nod and holding Mary a little closer to him. He looked over at June and read what she had written. If he had a smile ...
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Re: Featured Member April 20 - May 4: EthanHoover
Congratulations on getting FM!!
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Re: Bloodruns Keep
Everything had happened so fast that Télos was struggling to keep up with it: finding Tiberius/James, seeing the vampire queen, Estelle dying, two members of their group attacking the queen, ...
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Re: the life of an american teenager
Edit: As of December 22nd, 2020, all of the poems in this thread have been edited out. They all appear in a poetry book I'm self-publishing, so I thought it ...
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Re: the life of an american teenager
I'm glad I could inspire you, @Katteex! And thanks for the compliment. :)
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Re: The Town of Nightville [DT]
This is an hour late, but I love the first post! It's a great start to the storybook. :) I especially got a kick out of the first paragraph - ...
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Re: Second Chances [DT]
Okay! Sounds good to me. :) I just have to find a time that I'm free where you're still awake. I was originally thinking Friday, but I'm not free until ...
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Re: Choices made and in the making
I love your last poem! I'm always a sucker for destiny-related works, and your poem was no exception. I especially love all of the imagery you used - it really ...
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Re: 3am thoughts
It's really cool seeing how my poem inspired afternoon rainstorms - I can see where the inspiration came from, but I can also see your own spin on it. Also, ...
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