MadameX

My feelings on the subject are this: If homosexuality is not natural, why is heterosexuality? There have been several studies done showing that gay brain chemistry is slightly different from ...

1) Probably, as Kyllorac said, the lack of emphasis on male victims or gay couples. Also, emotional and mental abuse is sadly neglected in education. 2) abuse between two people ...

I don't know where you got that thing about Earth, but it's absolutely untrue. That said, the general rules for sci-fi are this: SF can take place in the future ...

I'm actually going through this exact same phase right now; having to completely rewrite a novel I spent 2 1/2 years on. This is what has been working for me: ...

Thanks for the reviews! I'll definitely edit this to try to be closer to what I was trying to say (I will defend myself, however, by saying that poetry about/criticizing ...

My first post--please tear it apart, if you will. Also, title suggestions are greatly appreciated. ******************************************* I must admit I find little use in poetry— the rhyme, me

While I agree there was emotion in your poem, there was too much of it, pushing the piece into 'emo' as opposed to a really heartfelt poem. In poetry, try ...

You have a good concept here, but there a re big problems with overwrought imagery, inconsistent voice, and some grammar mistakes. First, as Nate said, the point of your poem ...

If you google "average height" and click on the wikipedia entry, you can find average heights for males, females, different ethnicities, etc.

Good job on this. It is very interesting and engaging. That said, I feel that towrds the end of the poem it begins to get a little monotonous. Try to ...

I like your engaging way of writing and that you move the story along quickly. It did feel a little short, but that's maybe because I'm a novel kind of ...

This is a nice little poem. Not very deep, but it touches on some larger themes. In the second verse, I have a question: wouldn't the one unlike everyone else ...

My little sister dragged me to see this. Maybe its because I really dislike comedy movies, but 'Alice' was completely unappealing.

Very good. Really, its better than I could do, so I feel a little bad sayin that I have couple nitpicks. First, the middle section (5-10, approx.) was really nice. ...

You have a very good first verse here, and I'm going to have to agree with Evi in saying teenage angst/depression is a really hard poem to write because of ...