MadameLuxestrange

I really loved this! The only thing I really had trouble with was understanding where the story was taking place. I felt like you didn't separate the flashbacks very well ...

Luxe here, as requested. Okay, this was a good piece and it has so much potential to be great. I do agree with the grammar mistakes that were pointed out ...

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Hiya! I'm Luxe. This story made me giggle. There were several grammar mistakes with commas, so my reccomendation is to go back through and read it aloud to yourself so ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe and I'm going to review this for you. I very much liked the storyline that you've got going. There were several grammar errors that are easy fixes, ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe and I'm going to give you a review on this! Okay, I'm going to start with character development. To be honest, I don't really think your characters ...

Hiya! I'm Luxe. This was well-written and you used good word choice and voice. However, I thougt that there wasn't much of a story behind this. Your main character didn't ...

I don't have much to say for this other than I love it! :D I wish I knew what the music you guys had in mind for it was because ...

Hiya! Sorry, this is going to be a speedy review. I thought that this piece had a lot of emotion in it. There's this power that sets over the reader ...

Wow! I was going to say something about how it would be impossible for Autumn to have made it through being on the T-boned side of a car that got ...

I liked this a lot. The story line wasn't as original as you could've made it, but it was written fine. My thoughts on the writing were that it did ...

This was very good. I liked the amount of emotion that was poured into this. I loved it!

Hiya Wicked! Long time no see. Anyway, I really liked this. There are some things that I would like to know. I would like a little more background about what ...

Romance is really my forte and I thought I'd try something out that I've wanted to do for a long time. The main topic of this story is probably a ...

I loved this soooo much! The best part was the last stanza where you talk about falling in love too easily... that's me too! You've got great talent :D