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Re: The Eleventh Doctor [pencil]
I'm not an artist at all, but this was awesome! Great job!
Apr 25, 2011 -
Re: Used to Death
Okay, this was a pretty good start. I like the idea of twins trying to avenge their dead family and then finding out that one of them was actually not ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*
Harro Saks! Here as requested. Alright, I say this with all the love in the world, but your spelling HAS to get better! We live in the same house-ask for ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: The Soul Collector- 1
This was fantastic! You have such a way with words and the idea of this piece is so creative. I very much liked how you have a great plotline and ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Flutter By
Okay, this was brilliant! I totally feel that way about someone close to me and you've just put it in words. I was slightly curious about your choice of which ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Hush
I thought that this had a lot of good emotion behind it which kept the story moving. It also made the reader want to keep going. To me there should ...
Apr 21, 2011 -
Re: Charlie and Logan Chapter 7
Here's chapter 7. My special thanks goes to Kagi on this one. She has helped me so much with getting past the writer's block that i've been encountering while writing ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar
This was really funny. I actually enjoyed this a lot. The whole question of whether the story we're reading is a lie or not really keeps the piece going. However, ...
Apr 17, 2011 -
Re: Looking for good books (preferably vampire)
Alright, these are my favorite vampire series. There are some other sort of related types of books that I'm going to throw in here for kicks. Try these: Blue Bloods ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.
Kagi, this poem wasn't bad. It was just deeply unnerving. You give such great advice on my stuff that I can't imagine you not writing anymore! Please, for my sake ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Teenage Boy Lust
Haha, this is awesome. Boys suck.
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Me or him.
Loved it! I liked that there was something that didn't make it simple, like most love stories. I think that it was very well written. I would've liked a little ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Chapter One
Okay, so I really enjoyed this. You had great imagery and descriptions which made it so easy to picture the scenes in here. I think that was your strongest point ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
Gah! I love this! Sounds so much like love... it's amazing! I really did love this. Really. Like, seriously. :D
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: A Teenager's Meaning of Life
Okay, I thought that this was pretty good. There were a couple of grammar things that other people already pointed out and the whole thing with repetition was also touched ...
Apr 13, 2011
