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MadameLuxestrange

  • Art & Photography Re: The Eleventh Doctor [pencil]

    I'm not an artist at all, but this was awesome! Great job!

    Apr 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Used to Death

    Okay, this was a pretty good start. I like the idea of twins trying to avenge their dead family and then finding out that one of them was actually not ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Fantasy Novels Re: A name that means traveler: Prologue *edited*

    Harro Saks! Here as requested. Alright, I say this with all the love in the world, but your spelling HAS to get better! We live in the same house-ask for ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: The Soul Collector- 1

    This was fantastic! You have such a way with words and the idea of this piece is so creative. I very much liked how you have a great plotline and ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Flutter By

    Okay, this was brilliant! I totally feel that way about someone close to me and you've just put it in words. I was slightly curious about your choice of which ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Hush

    I thought that this had a lot of good emotion behind it which kept the story moving. It also made the reader want to keep going. To me there should ...

    Apr 21, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Charlie and Logan Chapter 7

    Here's chapter 7. My special thanks goes to Kagi on this one. She has helped me so much with getting past the writer's block that i've been encountering while writing ...

    Apr 19, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Thoughts of a Compulsive Liar

    This was really funny. I actually enjoyed this a lot. The whole question of whether the story we're reading is a lie or not really keeps the piece going. However, ...

    Apr 17, 2011
  • Media Reviews Re: Looking for good books (preferably vampire)

    Alright, these are my favorite vampire series. There are some other sort of related types of books that I'm going to throw in here for kicks. Try these: Blue Bloods ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.

    Kagi, this poem wasn't bad. It was just deeply unnerving. You give such great advice on my stuff that I can't imagine you not writing anymore! Please, for my sake ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Teenage Boy Lust

    Haha, this is awesome. Boys suck.

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Me or him.

    Loved it! I liked that there was something that didn't make it simple, like most love stories. I think that it was very well written. I would've liked a little ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Chapter One

    Okay, so I really enjoyed this. You had great imagery and descriptions which made it so easy to picture the scenes in here. I think that was your strongest point ...

    Apr 13, 2011
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You

    Gah! I love this! Sounds so much like love... it's amazing! I really did love this. Really. Like, seriously. :D

    Apr 13, 2011
  • General Articles Re: A Teenager's Meaning of Life

    Okay, I thought that this was pretty good. There were a couple of grammar things that other people already pointed out and the whole thing with repetition was also touched ...

    Apr 13, 2011


Regret has a flavor and it tastes like the espresso I consumed at 9pm.
— SilverNight