MadameLuxestrange

Okay, this was pretty good. I liked what you were going for here. Your first paragraph was really strong and vivid, giving the reader a clear picture of the person ...

I really liked this! I agree with Sol about the capitalization problems, but other than that I thought this was really good. Keep writing! Cheers, Luxe :D

Okay, so this was pretty good. I like the idea of the story. There were a couple things that need fixing though. La Oen Ba De Com . These words ...

I really loved this! This was beautiful and heartfelt and every other word that goes with amazing. My only nitpick is that I don't really think he would be telling ...

Hey Sol. Okie-dokie, I really enjoyed your story. It had a great idea going and I love the whole best friends falling for each other. It's great and you really ...

This is beautiful. Simply beautiful. I'm sorry... I'm not very good at writing poetry, so there's not much I can do to help you fix it. Of course, to me ...

This was beautiful! You've got a great talent and this poem proves it :) Keep it up! Cheers, Luxe :D

This made my day! I loved it. Cheers, Luxe :D

Okay, this was pretty good. I think that it was a little too short and that you could've expanded on this more. While it's a good ending for your character ...

Okay, this, however short it may be, was very well-written. It definitely builds up the anticipation for whatever you're writing next. There were a couple of grammar things that you ...

Okay, I'm going to have to agree with Ego on this being rather two-demnsional. It really does need more to it. Your characters weren't very well developed and we don't ...

Oooh! This was really good. Every word seemed so well placed and your grammar was impeccable. What stood out most to me was your storyline though. So unique and original. ...

Hi there! Alright, I like what you've got going here. I like the post-apocalyptic genre. It's very 'in' these days it seems. Anyhoo, someone else said that you should probably ...

Hey, I'm Luxe! Okay, so this story has tons of potential right now. I think that the story you're going for is great; you just have to get some things ...

Okay, this was pretty good. While the humor was rather juvenile, it was good for what kind of story you've got here. I like also that the "princess" of the ...