MadameLuxestrange

Thank you to all who have commented! :D

Alright, this was pretty good. Now, this nit-pick all depends on location. If they're in the middle of a park in the city, I don't really think that the mugger ...

Okay, seriously. You used some of the best descriptions that I have read in a long time. They were amazing! Three fingers like merciful saints and sinners. They slid down ...

Hey there! Want to review my short story, Lilies for me? I'd love some critique :) Cheers, Luxe :D

Hey there! Mind taking a look at my short story, Lilies? Cheers, Luxe :D

Haha! This made me laugh. Like, a lot. I am, like SmylinG, a devoted Twitard, and this was seriously fun to read. When someone actually makes a good parody, I ...

Okay, I agree with Jennya... this doesn't sound like schizophrenia that is affecting the MC. If you do decide to make the disease different, it would be good to look ...

Okay, this was pretty good. You used really amazing words that made the story flow well and keeps the reader interested. There were a couple of grammar mistakes, like the ...

Okay, this was really good writing! Most of the issues were with grammar, such as misplaced semicolons or missing commas. At first I was a little confused with what posistion ...

Hey Sol! Okay, this was pretty good. I thought the story was good and the part at the end where you say that his brother and her fell in love ...

OMG! Dems, you rock my socks with this :D

I really like your style and the insights that you have in here. You use really awesome descriptions that tug on the reader's emotions and that's really good. However, I ...

Hey, was wondering if you'd read my romance short story... here's the link if you would be willing! Cheers, Luxe :D

Hey Pink! Was wondering if you'd review my short story? Here's the link :) Cheers, Luxe :D

Hey! So this is inspired by my favorite couple on the TV show 'The L Word', Bette and Tina. Please, please, please give me some comments! I awoke to sunlight ...