MadameLuxestrange

This was really a great piece. I enjoyed every second I was reading it. Your descriptions were easy to see in my head and beautifully written, even in the parts ...

This was awesome! Very creative and funny. One nitpick, though, I swear there was electricity emanating from his beard. This is in present tense and the rest of your piece ...

Hey there. I was wondering if you would review my short little novella The Mermaid's Song? It's not going to be very long, pinky swear. But I was wondering if ...

Here's the next chapter of my short novella. Some have expressed concern that this may turn out too much like POC 4, but while some elements are similar (mermaids being ...

Great job! i can't write poetry, but I felt like I needed to tell you that i really love this :D

Hey IcyFlame! Was wondering if you could drop a review on a my new short novel?

I didn't know whether or not to call this action or romance because it is a little bit of both. Lately I have been obssesed with mermaids, so I figured ...

Hiya! I'm going to review this for you. Alright, I'm going to start with actual storyline. I'll get to grammar and such later. So, I like the general premise you've ...

So here is something that has roots in the novel I'm working on.This is a really rough copy of this. I wrote it a little too fast, so it's REALLY ...

Okay, this was pretty vague. I think that you've got a pretty good writing voice, but you're not applying it very well. You don't really have much of a story. ...

Hey, sorry I'm getting to this so late! Been so busy lately. Ash, my friend, your writing has so much improved :) This piece was very well written. I do ...

Hey Kagi! Here, as requested. Okay, I'm going to have to agree with the others that this seemed kind of essay-ish. To me it felt like there wasn't much going ...

Okay, so I've got a couple of things that I want to point out. Red is grammar, purple is word choice, and blue is my commentary. I looked as the ...

Mmm, you've got some good stuff on here! I'll have to check out the ones that I don't know :) Thanks

So, my word is 'North'. This story is what came to mind when I thought Cheers, Luxe :D *** The northern star had always been with her. It always called ...