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Re: Chapt 1:Not after everything we'd shared..
Hiya Kaka! You asked for me to review, so here I am! My color system is red for grammar and spelling, purple for word choice, and blue for my commentary. ...
Dec 21, 2010 -
Re: Kiss me when I'm sober
Hiya! When I saw your title the first thing that jumped to mind was the Evanescence song "Call Me When You're Sober". They're my favorite band so I had to ...
Dec 20, 2010 -
Re: I know you.
Hiya! Okay, I totally relate to this. You have no idea how much I relate to this. Seriously. Anyhoo, I would just work on spelling... that's probably the biggest error ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Angels - Prologue
Hiya! I must say, this is rather spectacular. I honestly cannot wait to read more. Your grammar and spelling were pretty much flawless and the storyline was great. Let me ...
Dec 12, 2010 -
Re: Deleted
Hiya! You've been reading my stuff, so I thought it was only fair that I come and read some of your stuff:D I have to say, I absolutely love this!!! ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Hazel-chapter 3
Hiya! Luxy here with your review! Once again, red is grammar, purple is word choice, and blue is my commentary. Adalyn lay on the soft red couch, unable to sleep. ...
Dec 6, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 2
Hiya Sakura! 'Kay, grammar and spelling are in red, word choice is purple, my comments are in blue! :D Hazel walked around her tower home, not sure what to do ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Can't Let You Go (Charlie and Logan chapter 3)
Hiya guys! Luxy here with the links to Chapters 1 and 2... just in case! ~Luxy :D - Chapter 1 - Chapter 2
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Books that were made into GOOD movies
I thought that Gone with the Wind was excellent and it stayed close to the book. Don't hate me, but I thought that every Harry Potter flick was good with ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
Hiya! This was HILARIOUS! Now, grammar and spelling= red, word choice=purple, and my comments and suggestions=blue. I typed this with my friends as a joke! Comment please. Harry Potter was ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Can't Let You Go (Charlie and Logan chapter 3)
Bon jour mes amis! Here's my third part to Charlie and Logan. I have decided to mix Charlie giving birth to Addison with the night that Charlie and Logan first ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Breathe Again...
Hi! This poem was incredbily well written! I thought that the word choice you used made it flow so well. The writing was so good that I was getting perfectly ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Any good books I can try?
Hey there! I highly reccomend: all of Ellen Hopkins' books are incredible. just be up for lots of drugs and sex. Sabriel, Lirael, and Abhorsen by Garth Nix- these are ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: Vampyre's Horror
Hey there! I really enjoyed this! I'm kind of a self-professed vamp/werewolf person so when I saw 'Vampyre's Horror' I had to check it out. Anyway, the story line was ...
Nov 23, 2010 -
Re: I love you
Hey there! This piece was very sweet and had great emotion. I agree with some of the other reviewrs that there is so much more potential for this. As one ...
Nov 23, 2010
