MadameLuxestrange

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. My system is red for grammar/spelling, purple for word choice, and blue for my own commentary. Chapter One: The ...

Hiya! This was really good. I very much enjoyed the imagery and the whole story you were telling in general. Its very sad and heartbreaking. Really there's not much I ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. First off, this was a AMAZING! I absolutely loved your characters, your imagery, everything. I thought that you showed ...

Oh my god! This was really great! I'm a huge fan of Twilight and that made me laugh super hard. Its very true about most girls and their obsession. I'll ...

The worst books I've ever read.... 1. The Chronicles of Narnia- First place definitely belongs to this series. I'm sorry to all you fans out there, but this series really ...

Hiya Wicked! Just Luxy here to take a look at your song. Really, I didn't find anything that stood out to me that I thought you should fix. The imagery ...

Alright, so my English class is doing a project for our Transcendentalism unit where we are going to try experimenting on things that would make us go out of our ...

You've got most of your list complete... although you're missing a very important one!!!!! MELISSA DE LA CRUZ! She wrote Blue Bloods! And I'm gonna admit that Twilight is one ...

I would say that I agree with you. I like it when people put in detail; I think that it gives the story more flare and that it sets the ...

Hmmm... Favorite titles? In the Forests of Hands and Teeth by Carrie Ryan Zombies vs. Unicorns by Holly Black Under the Banner of Heaven by Jon Krakauer V for Vendeatta ...

I LOVE naming characters! Its one of my favorite things to do when I'm creating a character. For a somewhat shy girl, I would use something interesting, say, Gabrielle. If ...

This is one of my favorite books, but is also disturbing- Flowers in the Attic by VC Andrews

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. My system is red for grammar/spelling, purple for word choice, and blue is my commentary. As they say... good ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'll be reviewing this for you today. First off, I applaude you for picking this storyline. This particular topic is very personal to me as I ...

Hiya! I'm Luxy and I'm going to review this for you. I want to start off by saying that this was excellent. It was very well written, your MC had ...