MadameCK

I hate how when I said those words you went and ran and hid. I hate the way you said you'd call - but you never did. I hate the ...

I thought that this poem was really sweet.(: It definitly reminded me of myself and that is always a good thing when your poems are relatable to readers. I like ...

Suzanne - Yes I am aware that people do not always cut with the intention of suicide but that was the specific purpose of the cutting in this poem. As ...

Christian - It's not so much the blood that helps. It's the feeling of control. When something happens you can't control how much it hurts you and for those of ...

I really liked how you managed to get candy and love - my two favorite things - into one poem. really creative. (:

She was crippled ; but it was her body that was so severly cracked. In her effortless attempts to piece together the events of the night before she found that ...

Well I'm nwe to YWS but I must say that that poem was really good. (: It had a lot of emotion and the rhyme scheme was great. Nice work.