MadHatter

Okay, I was looking through some of my old books and came across this in a book. In 6th grade I sent this into a contest and It got published. ...

fried Cheese! I love that stuff!

wow...too extensive for me tonight

9/10 it's cooler when you know the history behind it

*Those weren't really good crits* I think you did a good job but lacked that needed oumph. I can't quite place my finger on it, but you lacked something that ...

I truly suck about interpeting poetry so I was really hoping you'd explain it better. It was okay, no spelling errors or grammatical errors that I could see. You might ...

Good poem. It sort of lacked the rhythm a poem needs, but then again poems don't need rhythm at all. There are no rules in poetry. And for a suicide ...

It was good. It was about a caged animal isn't it? It was a little hard to follow, but okay. Kyte>> Notice it said Drip Drop? The upside down poem ...

Yes, BBB is right. Prelude is for music. I also felt that when Lt. Surge read the 1594 thing, it sounded un-human. It was almost like he was a robot ...

Yes. It's very, very, very short. And I agree with Ayra. I don't know how many times I've heard about poems, or read poems about lost love, or people losing ...

It was short, sweet, and to the point, plus it was good. I think you conveyed your point fairly well in such a short poem. I did find it a ...

I really liked this one. It was very sweet and touching. I don't know why you capitialized the first word of the third sentence in each stanza. But poetry really ...

Wow, are you just full of good description? Even just replying to a message you wonderfully describe things. But on to the critique. I'm not the best poet in the ...

Wow...that's very interesting. I hope you rate this PG-13. I hope you truly don't feel like this, or actually went through that...

Clever. You used this poem to basically tell everyone why your poems might not make sense grammar wise. But I have to agree with Bella. This poem is very in ...