MadHatter

"I will return." Dargon headed for the woods. "Where are you going? It's dangerous here. We have to go now!" Lethero yelled at him."In five minutes the cops are gonna ...

I liked your story and I intend to continue reading your story. This one was much better than the other one but still wasn't sci-fi. You really need to move ...

To most his act of staying would be considered an act of kindness, but it wasn't. In fact, they wouldn't have wanted Dagoon to stay if they knew his plans. ...

I liked your story but you mispelled several words. You failed to uppercase several i's. Overrall this was a well written piece but it definetly needed some work. And why ...

"Humans. Blaspehmeres. Creatures who soil the earth, and waste the air. They live only to supply their filthy wants and sinful desires..." Dargon began reciting an old Gorman proverb. "What ...

"Where are they Matthius?" Alexx lowered down to his level. "I would really like it if you didn't call me by that name." He strode over to the kitchen table, ...

Your piece was good but short. You really need to go into more detail because your story was really too hard to understand. You failed to put commas in spots ...

Once again I enjoyed your story though, also once again, you fail to tell us things and expect us to understand them. Such as why in the heck they even ...

"We'll meet back here in an hour. I'm gonna go find what I originally planned to do. Hunt." Dagoon swung off into the woods. "I can still have a normal ...

Peter floated in the light expanse of the temple of elders. He had bobbed in the clouds for hours, basking in the sun and the glory of his heroism. He ...

*okay, it was dead, don't just go find a storybook that no ones been posting on and say "I'm stuck." That's just weak. And I can be saying this because ...

Dargon looked around. They weren't safe. Someone was watching them. "I'd suggest that we move inside. Or at least out of the open. Foul eyes are upon us." He galloped ...

Yeah, I'll be following this one. I really enjoyed your last one even though it was short. You might want to explain why he said "Clone number one." That was ...

Dagoon smiled inwardly. Maybe these people weren't so bad. They were a lot like him. "Fine. I can respect those who respect themselves. Now what the hell are we supposed ...

"You don't understand my life. You'd come in here too if you were a hated species. I used to be friends with those things called humans. I used to have ...