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Age Two scenes unfold, before us gathered here, Two men shuffling forward on tired quests, Two lives which were marred by a fateful fear, Two people out to do only ...

Yes I agree it is a bit cliched and really, the whole story line is a bit predictable. I'll just post chapter one and two (unedited, just so you know) ...

I actually wrote a complete story from this finishing it about June last year, but it was for a school project and decidely average. Reading over parts of it make ...

I really liked that, it flowed really well. All the alliteration and rhymes that were encorporated throughout were really good. I can't really point out anything that I didnt like ...

Thanks alot Ofour :) I'm glad you liked it. There should be full stops in those places you pointed out, I'll fill them in now. I did actually mean preyed, ...

Thank you very much, I think that when I wrote it I was trying to, loosely fit it into iambic pentameter. Thanks alot, I'll try and make some additions with ...

W.H. Auden, Wilfred Owen, Oscar Wilde - in particular the poem written after getting out of prison and Tennyson.

I wrote the title for this poem and then came up with something totally different from what I had originally intended, so in that way the title is open to ...

That was really, really wonderful. It was beautifully descriptive and the paring off of contrasting object towards the end was artfully done. There were just one or two glitches in ...

Its a nice story, a nice easy read but it is a bit unsatisfying. The way Jude so easily accepts being turned into a chicken without any real panic doesn't ...

I loved the series as well and I really hope Stroud writes some more.

I like the fact that you have used a rhyming pattern, I personally much prefer poems with some rhyming scheme compared to those without. The moon projects an icy-cold, silver ...

The winding streets and alleyways are covered with filth, and you can either protect yourself, or you are dead. I think that you just need to repharse the latter part ...

"The pleasant sub-urban area of Fordingbridge was generally a well respected part of Southampton. Its leafy, graffiti-free streets had long been the backyard of many a middle class business man ...