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Thank you so much for responding! I have to agree with you on all of your points, though it will be sort of hard to add description about where I ...

you're right, Dark Angel. That flows much better. I'll be editing that now. I'll think about adding a few more lines, but it might be hard. Anyways, thank you for ...

Sara, I thank you a TON for your help. I guess it's just hard to write about something so close to heart. I want to point out one thing to ...

You think it's too repetitive? I guess it is. At the time that is what I was going for. Repetitiveness emphasizes key points in a story. Maybe it is a ...