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I posted it from my phone and clicked the wrong won't let me change it. Sorry.

I don't usually right 5 paragraph essays, this one just happen to turn out like one. Thank you so much for the advice and sorry I didn't get back to ...

An A word be great! Thanks so much for the grammar tips, some of them I already noticed and corrected on the real document but forgot to add them here.

First off, welcome to YWS! And yes, I'm not overly happy with that particular person. ;)

Thank you so much for the reviews! My skills are stronger in introductions than conclusions as you noticed. I am however always trying to improve. The spacing issue is happening ...

I didn't include the link because I did not know the specific rules on posting links to places. Below I listed the link, sorry it's long and gibberish looking.

I'm really sorry about the spacing issues, I don't know why that keeps happening. When I copy and paste it something must distort it. After reading your review( which I ...

Thanks so much! My space bar was being a little weird, and I thought I got all the errors out. Whoops ;)

Oh my gosh, thank you!! This was super helpful!!

Can you be more detailed in the "grumbling clarity and simplicity" part of that? I would love to improve upon this peace in anyway possible.