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By the lake, we watch the day, Grow old and die away, And merge into the distance with the waves. The sun goes down and leaves us there, Watching us ...

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"I ain't gonna work on Maggie's farm no more No, I aint gonna work on Maggie's farm no more Well, I wake up in the morning Fold my hands and ...

living in California, I'm going to try my hardest to not mention the teacher's unions, but yah, education sucks. I just don't mean educational performance, but the idea in general. ...

I have two, Catch 22 by Joseph Heller (I pronounce it yo-seph, 'cause he's jewish), and Crime and Punishment by Doestoevesky(which I spelt wrong). These two are so important to ...

I get it.

Cruci-fixation, or Crucifiction? I really liked the piece, and I'll promise a full review if you clean up the title. I like the pun, if it is indeed intended! :)

Well, I checked this out because I live down the road, and I was very impressed. The power with which you describe eating an orange (but I'm sure there is ...

I like the consistency, but it is kind of rigid, maybe add some twists and turns, and maybe seek out some different language, that could definitely make this more impactful ...

Ah yes writer's block, the poet's natural enemy.

it's good, just change them into complete sentences, that will work much better. :)

I like the word play and the opening line because the expletive really draws me in. I can't even open my mouth without shit coming out. My mind is in ...

Looks real cool.

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