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Excellent, yes, this is probably on its way to being a masterpiece, but not quite yet, a couple years of refining and yah, we'll see this in the New Yorker, ...

Awwwwwwwww....tears much... Anyway, I really liked this, it was very lyrical, and very personal, though a bit cluttered, that is why i am here! First of all i like the ...

This was great, I can truly say that I have never read anything like this, so inventive. Though I don't know about the stanzas that get away from the quick ...

5. Never Cry wolf by farley mowat except for the part where he runs around naked 4. The Stranger by Albert Camus that guy was such a dousche bag! 3. ...

Welcome. I liked this, it was very solid. I won't go into details, cause man it is so damn late right now. But anyway, this was very consistent, and it ...

Hey it's better than anything I can do. I do like it, it's kind of liberating. It has transfixed me and it will hang in the Louvre soon than later!

I am part Irish, so yes, I WORSHIP THE POTATOE! But I don't know, is this really about potatoes? Or are they a metaphor, anyway... 'stead of (a) workin out ...

I think there is something wrong with this site! This must be like the thousandth thing i've read about rape, or torture, or molestation or incest... If this was a ...

A Leaf's life and yours... Your life is like a leaf. It starts out so bright and green, hopeful. combine the first two sentences, and replace "so bright and green" ...

Thank you both, and yah, the rhymes are kind of arkward, but so was she (and so am I) that's the idea...

I Found Myself Loving Sylvia Plath (A Mad Boy's Love Song) A Broken Villanelle I found myself loving Sylvia Plath, As I was walking down the primrose path. I always ...

This really captures the thing that I find greatest about life, that a Utopia, what everybody thinks they want, is actually a dystopyia, because there is nothing else left to ...

AHHH! CLiffhanger! I haven't read the first 3 chapters, and know nothing of the plot of the story (I think she is some sort of demon hunter or dragon hunter ...

Thank you guys very much, such kind words should only be repaid with unmitigated scorn. Just kidding.

I love the refrain about what a heart has done, and i love the intensity of this poem, I have a few suggestions of course, as I am probably one ...