MUCHO

Love the concept, though your tone may be too strong. You wonder about the girl in the last stanza and just come to a conclusion about her, and I believe ...

I don't know if you were there that day, so please don't take this personally. As a work of fiction, there is some great imagery and stream-of-consciousness here; but I ...

Though the first one may have gone completely over my head (I hope so), I loved "Forest Fire" because it so perfectly captures the state of life of which we ...

Anyone with a soul has felt this way at one time or another, and that why this poem is great-to condense such a general feeling into four so concise lines ...

Extremely heartfelt, I got a great sense of what you were or still are feeling. I also liked the Deux es machina in the line about Taylor Swift, even though ...

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