MRMarathon

thanks snoik. idk if you read in the last paragraph but he's drinking 3 gallons of water a day by force since it doesn't taste too well. but idk if ...

A venomous sky pours out a gushing storm with the fierceness of a despot. I listened to the outside, it was so loud. The room was all obscure and dark, ...

I think this would be a great magazine piece. Did you send it yet? So what's this THEMA anyways?

I'd like to say I loved that. even though i don't know the back story. One thing I would work on though would be the beginning. It seems you focus ...

The Strawberry Blonde One (note the story is not told in a straight forward timeline. eventually in the end you will see the true reality and connect the dots. i ...

somehow i think you were twistedly joking with this piece to see what kind of reaction you would get. but i liked it. i think it could be an amazing ...

2 PART EPISODE. (see definition of holocaust if you're going to complain about the title, does not refer to historical event in this case) Barbarians on the Holocaust Highway Driving ...

i think you have an excellent style here. what i really love about it is that you write outside of the box and more like a slick person would with ...

"Earlier today, a woman was found dead in her apartment...investigators are looking into various leads...police are still looking for the other news..." April Reese lies in bed and watches the ...

seems interesting and spiteful but you're right it is a little on the bland side. i think you should create a preceding situation where there is imagery and characters involved ...

There once was a little boy who longed for nothing but to able to play outside. He would sit in his chair with his long almond eyes, staring outside at ...

Dylan the Vain Alexander ran for his life, even running into the door on his way out and tripping over stairs before he finally reached the subway back to his ...

that was stunning to my heart. i was wondering about that end. it seems like some kind of taboo is going on. but the girl, she's wicked which makes the ...

whoever says this isn't interesting ,ust be ridiculous or something. i thought it was very intriguing from the start and it enticed me the whole way through. a simple romantical ...

my answer to most or all of the questions is that this is purely exaggerated and more for entertainment value. my use of gentlemen is for irony and to make ...