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Re: Gale-A hunger Games fanfic
she’d gone to far mentioning the Mockingjay too Katniss had trod all over my stitched up heart all over again. maybe use something different than "all over" one of the ...
Feb 26, 2011 -
Re: Fire and Ice
"She is too powerful too (to) exist in this world any longer." (H) is icy breath froze in the ornate mirror. A message appeared in the condensated water. "I am ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: The Blackwood Conspiracy
But I have new, frightening, information I think you want to take the comma out after frightening. Would he really kick the door closed behind him when he's shooting people? ...
Feb 25, 2011 -
Re: Mr.Silence Must Die
Oh my gosh, I've done that so many times. I'll start writing and it's like I go into a coma, and when I wake up, there's this really creepy poem ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Maximum Ride: 9/11
Hihi! Here's what I've got to make you become famous! my friends-my flock-my family I'm not sure that's the type of punctuation (is it a type of punctuation?) you want ...
Feb 23, 2011 -
Re: Duty calls
Yeah, there are a couple of things... With a gray hood over my (eyes) I couldn't see anything, but that was the least of my problems. My hands (felt) soft ...
Feb 21, 2011
