MOIMOW

I saw the blad I think you mean blade... The person I was fighting now, shoved my sword and you don't want a comma there...and that's all I see, but ...

I don't know how people can not like this story! And yes, that's my review. Thank you for bringing light and laughter into the world, and kudos on being able ...

Werewolfs vs. garden gnomes! (I'm mostly kidding.)

Boys are such jerks in high school...and middle school...and most of elementry school when they push you down if they like you. I can only hope it gets better in ...

Anyone who texts and drives. It kills people, idiots! People who post drunk photos of themselves on Facebook and don't expect anything to happen, like their mom seeing it. My ...

It rhymes! Again! How do you get it to do that? It's awesome. Now, I love it, though it depresses me just a bit, but that's life, I guess. Depressing ...

Hypnotizing. I'm ready to find out more. Of the two words, I'd choose undisturbed, but only because I know what it means. :) Okay, I just dictionary.comed it and it ...

Thank Heavens, logical love. I was beginning to think the whole world had gone mushed brains, and yet it's still sweet. That's the way to do it.

Real quick, the only things I noticed were... rip you to shreds like a chid tearing up napkins I believe you meant child. And I think you could put a ...

Hey, Kwantacky! Wow, this makes total sense to me. And I'm sure it'll make more total sense when I read more. I like it, and it is very cool that ...

This was really good! It has a lot less spelling errors than most pieces I review, so thank you for that. So I only have a few things... cloud of ...

Thanks for all the reviews so far. The meaner the merrier, so really go at it!

Darn. This always happened Should it be always happens? I don't know, technically, it could go both ways. nearly yelled irritated , after yelled miss Parker should be Miss Parker ...

I found this in one of my many scribbled upon notebooks the other day. It's just a short little thing. I figured I'd post it. I'm totally okay with editors ...

LUUUUUUUUUUUVVVVVV it!!! (I meant to misspell that, please forgive my ungrammaticalness. And I just googled ungrammaticalness. Soooooooo not a real word.) And you're right, it rhymes! Awesome, mine ne