MOIMOW

Hey. Your title drew me in. Ever seen Wicked? It's a great play. Anyway, down to buisness. My mother always said , ‘No rest for the wicked’ troublemaker named Diana ...

Hey there! Good job with grammar, I barely found anything. Here's what I did find... He knows that Forgot a period there... Other than that there are some places where ...

Hi there. Let's review this thing! I go to a school Maine school in Maine... With that, I pulled her up, homding her against my chest Holding... Oh, reverse vampires! ...

Very nice. Personally, I'm just drawn in more to poems if they rhyme. Nicely worded. Keep writing!

Okay, no grammar stuff. Then I really, really liked it. Your character had a great voice and was genuinely enjoyable. She's quick, witty, and she can make great analogy's to ...

I loved this song when you decided to KILL SOME FLIES! I'll admit, sometimes I didn't understand what was going on, but then I thought about the songs I hear ...

Hello. I am here to see what I can say about your lovely poem. wearied of lifes complexities you mean the complexities belonging to life, so you want to say ...

Heyya! Very good grammar, for the most part. The only thing I found was... Oh but they sound so sweet and wonderful there should probably be a comma after the ...

Hi there! Let's get this review on! But why my hands are shaking you forgot an are... statues of angels and saints watching upon me watching over me makes more ...

Hi ya! Okay, so, straight to the review. But no, your not Prince Charming the your should be a you're, common mistake... Your you same thing... I amn't meaning to ...

Hahaha. Ahhh...I wish I had a twin. I loved it, the ending was a very sweet contrast to the rest of the sibling rivarly. Good job. Keep writing!

Been there.

I like it! Why aren't there more stories about superhero tortoises? I did notice flies was misspelled (misspelled: also a word that is misspelled almost daily) and Marvin is either ...

This made me go, "AHHHHHH, cute." I like it. All I can say is you use stones twice close together and stars twice, but the stars one I think is ...

This is for everyone who realizes how ridiculous the idea of true love is, but can't stop thinking about it. "You can't prove it doesn't exist!" The nerdy boy insisted, ...