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I loved your love poem, and that's odd, 'cause I hate love, but I love oxymorons. :) Ahh, it had a happy ending, too. That's always good. Better than a ...

Oh, it was incredibly cheesy. It could've been in the romance section at Wal-Mart. :) Generally I agree with all your reviews, and I thank you for them. I also ...

I didn’t ever wake up thinking, Okay, I’m going to have creepy creatures from another dimension trying to kill me today. No. Nobody thinks that. Not true. I do that ...

“Lena, I’m going to tell you something that is the last thing in the world you are ever going to want to hear.” The suspense! It nearly killed me! I, ...

Hmm, this was...deja vu-y. I wonder why... :) (I love smileys.) Interesting and well-described. My one complaint, (I should always have one complaint, or else I won't be a good ...

Poor thing, had to move to Brookings. The horror! ;) Lena should be on our website, with all the revising she does. My one complaint (one, Mell, don't hyperventilate, it's ...

'Sup? Oh, yeah, I'm here to review. She looked behind her should er and groaned knew it was his word against hers he must’ve threatened to keep him silent I ...

The more that ' s spread That was the only grammar thing I found. Cute analogy. And it rhymes! I love poems that rhyme! Keep writing!

Hi. You have very good grammar, (Thank you for that!) but I did catch one thing... Of course I’ll go with you,” h e said , smiling I think you ...

This was really beautiful. Good job. I really, really hope this isn't a true story, but I have the feeling it is. Either way, you captured the emotion perfectly. Keep ...

Hey. The way this poem is set up makes some parts kinda hard to understand. For example... They're small,tiny,and shift. Doesn't get afraid at all those dumbs, I could kill ...

Hey. I liked the details in the first paragraph. Great simile. This story has a lot of potential, but I think it needs to be longer. You could show the ...

I once saw in some teen magazine that writers have a tendency to fall in love with their perfect image of someone, not the person themselves. I think this explains ...

Wow...you weren't kidding about the darkness. The twist at the end made the story twice as good, though. Good grammar, though the exclamation points at the end seemed like a ...

Lovely. Love-ly. I adored you character's voice. The story was great. A couple little things. At one time you say, "It was...now." Was and now don't belong in the same ...