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I don't see anything wrong with it except it's mushily romantic, but hey, you gotta write what you gotta write. Smiley face!

Hey. I enjoyed this story. I liked the MC very much. I think the thing this story needs most is a spell check. I noticed some errors in that category. ...

Ugh! I got so mad when I was reading this! Boys like Drew are the problem with society! They get called "playas" and girls get called sluts. Okay, rant over. ...

I liked this, because insanity and I are very well acquainted. It is perfectly okay that it doesn't rhyme. Sometimes, when you force something to rhyme that doesn't want to ...

Thanks for mentioning the ages, because at first I thought they'd be teens, like stories usually are when written on YWS, then I thought she was elementry, then I thought ...

This was pretty. I could tell you bended some words to get it to rhyme, but I'm not one of those picky people who really care about that. One question: ...

Okay, fitness fanatic talking ducks...I wish my dreams had those. Good job. I enjoyed this a lot. If it were my story (which it's obviously not, I could never come ...

We all know a guy like this. I think you could make this longer. Mostly, you just bashed on the guy, but if the MC really can't forget him, then ...

The first time I read the title, I read it as I'm visiting your mom , and I was like, "Uh oh, this can't end well." And then Stacy's Mom ...

Hey, I really liked the description and metaphors in this. You're right, it is short, but I think it gets the point across. Grammatically, She hide in the should be ...

Love, I'm so scared. Isn't that funny? I'm freaking terrified. After all the times you've called me fearless with a scowl in your eyes, I'm afraid. I'm scared I'll forget. ...

Thanks so much, everyone! You guys make my day! I'll consider what everyone's said. Please, keep commenting!

Cheerfully dedicated to my clueless, annoying stalker. Though 100 times more harmless than the one in the poem, I'll still gladly kick his butt any day. I know I'm going ...

Darn it. Because of the rhyming, I thought it was going to be a happy poem. But then I read it. And now I can honestly say you have ruined ...

LOOOOVE IT! Of course, because everyone on this site can relate to it.