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Re: Head, Heart, and Soul
My soul walks a path uncharted, A road never finished once started, Up to the gates unguarded. This is my path uncharted. My heart plays a game with no rules. ...
Jul 24, 2011 -
Re: Stonger Than Love
Okay, you've sufficently depressed me for today. :) Or I suppose I should do a :( As I was reading this, I was thinking two things. One: Wow, you must ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Molly McCoys
Molly McCoys swore off all boys at the reasonable age of 13. She'd had her first crush but it wasn't the rush she'd expected it would've been. Molly McCoys again ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: (Wish it Was a) Fairytale
Hey. This made me feel all warm and fuzzy inside too. Not. So, yeah. You creeped me out a little, but in a good way. The lines sometimes felt uneven, ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Imaginary: Part 2
Alright, I love this story.There had better be more. (I'm not threatening you, I'm just asking. Strongly. Without ever taking no for an answer.) A couple of things I noticed. ...
Jun 22, 2011 -
Re: Real or not?
And I don't think half-real is confusing. I have the same question about my characters.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Real or not?
Why???? Why can I only hit the like button once???? Great job. :)
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Bunnies Are Evil
No wonder my dog barks at them... Neat-o little story. (No one says neat-o anymore, do they?) I liked it. I just saw a few grammatical errors I thought I'd ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Bunnies Are Evil
No wonder my dog barks at them... Neat-o little story. (No one says neat-o anymore, do they?) I liked it. I just saw a few grammatical errors I thought I'd ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Angry
Okay. Deep breath. This is senseless, shapeless, and I'm not even sure you can call it a poem. But I like it a lot. I don't really know why. I'm ...
May 31, 2011 -
Re: Letters *Edited*
I feel I'm not going to be able to do a very good review, because I have the beautiful bittersweet feeling every writer wants a reader to get when they're ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: Chapter1 & Prolouge
Hey Wolfy! I liked this. I didn't like the brother, though. What a jerk. There are some places where your spelling and phrases get a little iffy. For example: A ...
May 29, 2011 -
Re: I Am Here
You have no reason to be worried, You have no reason to be scared. I am here. I am here. I am here. I'm shining light through your darkness, I'm ...
May 23, 2011 -
Re: Please click this
I had my mommy, whom I love dearly, change all that. Thank God for English teachers as parents.
May 19, 2011 -
Re: Please click this
The spoiler's not actually spoiling anything, so go ahead and click it. Okay, so it's the last week of school for me and I have to write this stupid, time-absorbing, ...
May 18, 2011
