User avatar

MOIMOW

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: My Son is Gay

    I had to like this, even though I didn't like the father at all. Ugh, people like that make me so frustrated! But this seemed really realistic. Good job. Keep ...

    Dec 6, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: I'm Not My Name

    All I have to say is very creative. I wondered what a poem with this title could be about, and I wasn't expecting this. Nice tree metaphor, I liked it ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I didn't always love you.

    I liked it. Everything that I saw to be fixed already was by other reviewers So maybe I shouldn't be wasting your time with my review, but I just had ...

    Nov 15, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Envy

    We've all been there, haven't we? Especially inside jokes. I know I hate inside jokes I don't get, but I'm totally a hypocrite, because I have so many inside jokes, ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: No Heartbeat Detections

    I, too, didn't get it 'til the end, and then it hit me. And I liked the feeling that happened when it hit me. So, if your goal was to ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Dreamer

    You're awesome, dude. I LOVED it. I guess what I should say is thank you for blessing the world with this specimen of pure perfection. Or does that go a ...

    Nov 13, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A Colder Calypso

    Hey! This is really good. I forgive your language. I hear worse in school hallways every day. I have to admit, I had to google Spetsnaz. One paragraph didn't make ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: I Am Happy (Help Me)

    Well, I liked it. If I know what story you were trying to tell with this, and I think and really hope I do, this is like one of those ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: La Flor de Oro

    Oh, Mell, you always know exactly what to do to make me feel like a slacker. :)

    Nov 1, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Letting Go

    Don't think that you know me, because you don't. Don't think I'll let you in, because I won't. Don't think you'll ever see me cry, because that I'll never do. ...

    Oct 23, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: River Shore

    If I could shoot into the sky and pass by stars so very nigh and fly without paying a fee, still, I wouldn't be close to free. If I could ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever

    I won't go on and on about how much I liked this. (But I did!) The other reviewers have taken care of that for me. :) My one complaint was ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Writers Block

    You have this physical need to write something. You want so badly,to put the picture behind your eyes onto paper so other people can see it the way you do. ...

    Aug 15, 2011
  • Official Polls Re: Do your characters talk to you?

    Yeah they do, and you better believe I talk back. School, friends, family...few realize it, but there are waaay more people in the room than they thought. It confuses people. ...

    Jul 28, 2011
  • Romantic Novels Re: Addicted to a shadow - chapter two

    Okay, I'll admit, I'm being pulled in. I thought I'd just take a quick look to see what it was about...and I read both chapters. As for POVs, right now ...

    Jul 26, 2011


not to be woke but i just can't go around eating houses
— chi