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Re: My Son is Gay
I had to like this, even though I didn't like the father at all. Ugh, people like that make me so frustrated! But this seemed really realistic. Good job. Keep ...
Dec 6, 2011 -
Re: I'm Not My Name
All I have to say is very creative. I wondered what a poem with this title could be about, and I wasn't expecting this. Nice tree metaphor, I liked it ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: I didn't always love you.
I liked it. Everything that I saw to be fixed already was by other reviewers So maybe I shouldn't be wasting your time with my review, but I just had ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Envy
We've all been there, haven't we? Especially inside jokes. I know I hate inside jokes I don't get, but I'm totally a hypocrite, because I have so many inside jokes, ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: No Heartbeat Detections
I, too, didn't get it 'til the end, and then it hit me. And I liked the feeling that happened when it hit me. So, if your goal was to ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: The Dreamer
You're awesome, dude. I LOVED it. I guess what I should say is thank you for blessing the world with this specimen of pure perfection. Or does that go a ...
Nov 13, 2011 -
Re: A Colder Calypso
Hey! This is really good. I forgive your language. I hear worse in school hallways every day. I have to admit, I had to google Spetsnaz. One paragraph didn't make ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: I Am Happy (Help Me)
Well, I liked it. If I know what story you were trying to tell with this, and I think and really hope I do, this is like one of those ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: La Flor de Oro
Oh, Mell, you always know exactly what to do to make me feel like a slacker. :)
Nov 1, 2011 -
Re: Letting Go
Don't think that you know me, because you don't. Don't think I'll let you in, because I won't. Don't think you'll ever see me cry, because that I'll never do. ...
Oct 23, 2011 -
Re: River Shore
If I could shoot into the sky and pass by stars so very nigh and fly without paying a fee, still, I wouldn't be close to free. If I could ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: The Most Awesome Story Ever
I won't go on and on about how much I liked this. (But I did!) The other reviewers have taken care of that for me. :) My one complaint was ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Writers Block
You have this physical need to write something. You want so badly,to put the picture behind your eyes onto paper so other people can see it the way you do. ...
Aug 15, 2011 -
Re: Do your characters talk to you?
Yeah they do, and you better believe I talk back. School, friends, family...few realize it, but there are waaay more people in the room than they thought. It confuses people. ...
Jul 28, 2011 -
Re: Addicted to a shadow - chapter two
Okay, I'll admit, I'm being pulled in. I thought I'd just take a quick look to see what it was about...and I read both chapters. As for POVs, right now ...
Jul 26, 2011
