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This is a great poem. I know, because I lost my grandfather a while back, as well... The constructive critisism is in bold :) When will I die? How will ...

Thanks, captain.classy! Saw your point- edited it in - smiled at the results :D Happy holidays! :smt111 ~Mel

Just a little ditty I wrote for one of my stories a loooooong time ago... Enjoy! Nothing that the world can do Will ever separate us two. Naught but death ...

Great poem! My favorite line You put your two hands together seemingly like in a prayer. I've seen flies do that and have thought the same thing! Review: How was ...

I don't usually like abstract poems, but this one I found riveting- great job ^_^ In the first paragraph you change tenses- you say "We fly" (present tense) and then ...

That is exactly the sort of character I get in a writer's block over because I can't think of his name- I keep asking him, but he won't tell me! ...

Okay, so this is how this exercise works: 1) I'm going to describe a character- so, for example, I'll say: "Male, short, stout, wiry black hair that's rather sparse, squinting, ...

Thanks for replying, and for the advice- I'll definitely try it out ^_^

Never (at least so far as I've read) has there been a Georgette Heyer that didn't have a happy ending, you'll love it! And the main guys are soooooo good- ...

There really isn't much more to criticize, but I really love your story! I do think you ought to describe more, and there is one thing I'd change "Awesome," shouted ...

If you had a book that you wanted to have bound- and none of that cheap stuff- but really bound , like it would if it were being published... where ...

Oooo, I like this! And there weren't any typos that I could see :) One teeny tiny thing, though. When Faye comes in and asks your MC which dress she ...

What attracted you to her books? Mom brought one home from the library and I was bored. But I soon grew to love them for what they were. Most of ...

I Capture the Castle by Dodie Smith. Well, it's probably not the worst , but it's the worst I've read recently. It was just kind of boring and all through ...

First of all, great poem! I would have thought that this was one of those poems where there is no punctuation, but you use it at first, so, just a ...