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Hey, if you don't want to add more, then don't! I really don't like it when someone asks me to write more of a thing that I'd rather just let ...

You know you're a writer when you view your life (and your friend's) in plot-form and wonder daily how you could spruce it up a bit.^_^ ~Mel

A crisp winter's night in the mountains, with dark, towering spruce and pine trees looming overhead, and an ivory globe of a moon shinning it's eerie light through the stray ...

"Sprig Muslin" by Georgette Heyer, just like your book, it had a great storyline and was sooo entertaining, but the end was NOT satisfactory :( I was so disappointed that ...

I really like the way this poem is going, but it ends too abruptly, add some more to it! You could tell why you think the rain is raging, or ...

First of all, welcome to YWS! Now for the review: If tonight you feel what I feel for you, you can not imagine how happy that would make me. The ...

I like how this poem has a personal feeling to it that you can really relate to, it draws you in and holds you there until the end- love it! ...

Hi, Welcome to YWS! Just a few things I'd consider revising... I know when eyes meet and heart cross An electricity courses through us. "cross" and "us" have this flowing, ...

Anyone?

Thanks for all the advice everyone, it's deeply apreciated!

Thanks, Lily! *hugs*

Kinda hard to tell because the picture is so dark, :) but I think you did a good job with the depth of the drawing- with me, depth (in drawing ...

Ooooh, I liked this! And welcome to YWS! :D Short, sweet poems are my favorite, and the only thing I can find to correct in this is the loss of ...

Great job with this, I got a pretty vivid picture of...well... that ...and the head :shock: ...and the axe...and... :thud: The only thing, you changed tenses a few times, like ...

Nice job with this, the way you write reminds me of the 'Redwall' series by Brian Jacques, only with that the main characters are mostly mice, not cats :) You ...