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Wow. You definitely put this poem in the right category- great job! I really enjoyed reading this, especially because, though it doesn't contain a rhyming structure, you still have it ...

Okay, this is going to be the first part of a story I post on here, so be ruthless in your criticism. (It's rated 12+ for some very, very mild ...

Wow. That is like the ultimate 'my kind' of poem. I loved it! All the description and the feeling, you can totally picture the whole scene! Nitpick: "even I have ...

Hi, Naserian! Sorry I didn't review this sooner- I haven't been on YWS for a while :) Like Isha and A.S., I thought the rhymes were a little forced, and ...

Hiya! I really liked this poem, and didn't think the end was preachy at all. I agree with what Snoink said about developing the idea about what kinds of scars ...

Love the point of view, you did a great job with this poem! My mom thinks puppets (especially marionettes) are scary, clowns too, she puts on her 'never buy these ...

Something I wrote a little while ago- enjoy! Come walk through the garden- Not ours, but the world's. Come rediscover the spot That we played in as girls. High up ...

My favorite stanza "The ships are coming in, The storm is on its way, People run indoors, They hide form its anger," I really don't have anything to suggest, except ...

Writing the two words instead of the contraction in description or other wise is all fine and dandy, and does make the work look more professional in the long run, ...

I liked this, it has a fresh, interesting flow to it :D Just a few suggestions... I have nothing to do and I am lonely. I don't really think a ...

I love Emily Dickinson and nearly all her poems. This one in particular is tacked onto my wall :) ~Mel

Ha! Nice, I liked it! Only thing: "He scurried away also" the 'also' is an unneeded word, 'tis my opinion that the poem would flow better without it. Keep writing! ...

I LOVE this poem. What else can I say? I can't find anything to suggest, and so being this isn't technically the best of the reviews, because the best are ...

You forgot the glasses.

Hi! Living and dreaming- This part doesn't flow quite as well with the rest of the poem, perhaps if you were to add 'then' between 'dreaming' and 'and'. Also, I ...