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Hi, ehte92 I really enjoyed this poem, it felt deep and pure somehow, and I loved how you gave such a clear view of the girl's character. Very nice! The ...

Wow. Yes. Exactly. And I thought I was all alone in my despair! After the first draft of a novel that I know will need so much polishing and changing ...

I'm seeing My-len.

I think you should take a few sentences and describe Mr. Rosster, at least to the extent of height, rough age, and density (fat, thin, buff,). Plus, how did Elena's ...

Also, Ella Enchanted was a book first too. I actually like the movie and the book both. Ditto, EAHailstone! I love the book, and the movie's cute too, but they ...

Love it! You kept my attention all the way through. You are going to write more, I hope? Pretty please? It was in this way that made Rosster find himself ...

Like Fiction said, this is great for you first poem. I really like the subject matter, and think a lot of people can relate :) One suggestion... They shout and ...

This seems like it was part of a book. If not, then I thought it was a little confusing that you didn't explain some things. By 'test' did you mean ...

Hi, and welcome to Mel's Melodious Mild Reviews ! The place where every review request (well, almost) is welcome! Please, take a left down the red velvet carpet and have ...

Reading this made me feel so calm and cheerful, you can write really well. The way you tossed in all those descriptions without cluttering each sentence makes me pea-green with ...

Thank you for the advice, I am in both your debts! (crawls out of the pit of despair)

An Idea clutches me by the throat, I feverishly write/type it down and begin constructing the plot, I write all day in tense anticipation for what will come next... Then, ...

Though I may come and go unnoticed, I have returned once again! Bwhahahaha! But, (sigh), who knows how long I'll stay, I have little-to-no computer time :( -Mel

I like this, it has a different rhyming system that, though to some might sound forced, I see as an actual way of rhyming and therefore don't object to ^_^. ...

I'll definitely edit those nitpicks out, and I see what you mean about the run on sentence- thanks for the advice! I'll be posting the next addition soon. Glad you ...