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Re: Chapter 2 ~Fire and Ice~ a tale of a wolf
Fire and Ice Chapter 2 There are few words that can explain school for me, one is hell, another possibly prison, yeah definitely prison. These red and gold hallways are ...
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Re: First Haunt (working title)
I love this lol, I love that its a world that you can completely do what you want. I wish life was like this, I think this definatly something fun ...
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Re: Renesmee Cullen
Hi, Ok first off I think this has mega potential its just that its more than predictable, its almost self explanatory. I think if your going to write about renesmee ...
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Re: A Vampires Kiss
I think its great, I am more of a werewolf guy myself but thats not important =). Its very interview with a vampire, I think the whole transformation seen should ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: Not Here
Hi, I really like this I think its very unique and can be anything u want at this point. I definitely think you should continue this your writing is very ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: The Apocalypse
Hey , First off I think all writers who tackle Armageddon are daring and brave. I like you story it has unbelievable potential, except for that its very random and ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: The Apocalypse
Hey , First off I think all writers who tackle Armageddon are daring and brave. I like you story it has unbelievable potential, except for that its very random and ...
Oct 25, 2010 -
Re: 2012: The year of Armageddon
* This is something me and my friend thought, so I took the liberty to write about. So I hope you enjoy Chapter 1 of this story* My home is ...
Jul 24, 2010 -
Re: Jessie's Kiss
wow this is good and very wild. I honestly didnt expect this, I cant wait for what ever comes next. Good luck this is very good and scary honestly, and ...
Mar 3, 2010 -
Re: chapter 1 ~ Fire and Ice ~ a tale of a wolf
I lingered in the darkness tonight, I kept falling, I kept myself in the unknown. In the emptiness of my shut eyes I focus on my hands, they tingle, this ...
Feb 20, 2010 -
Re: Balema - A World of Many Elements Chap 1 EDIT
This, in my opinion is not a good place to begin. I feel as if you flooded your brain into one page. The environment is well thought out but this ...
Feb 18, 2010 -
Re: prolouge ~Fire and Ice~ a tale of a wolf
*I rethought my beginning and started over so here is a rough draft* I stared at the moon tonight, analyzing its every crevasse ,as it boasts in its full glory. ...
Feb 17, 2010 -
Re: Deeper Love Inside
Life is pointless, death is inevitable, and love is the only variable that keeps them from clashing for our fate. But without love our fate of death, becomes our destiny. ...
Jan 8, 2010 -
Re: Speak up
quite spectacular stranger, each word effortlessly flowed. Its like i can see you saying them. a beautiful poem if thats what it is.
Jan 7, 2010 -
Re: * Fire and Ice* a tale of a wolf
Chapter 4-- its gonna seem like twilight but It has a twist They were flawless as they fell into ranks, Matt led the way he was the alpha, the head ...
Jan 4, 2010
